NFSGalaxy

I had to drop All or Nothing because it was deleted off my old computer (more like it crashed and no recovery). Here's a new series that will be more persistent with more drama. Shorter segments too so many entries in short times.



March 25, 2013
I’m running away from myself. I wake up screaming to see my parent scared to death. I obviously knew they were going to take me to the psychiatrist again; it’s been two weeks since my last visit. Before I really start, my name is Laura Seals, you know like the animal. My life pretty much sucks since my birth mom died; she was murdered at gun point in Bridgeport. That was ten years ago, when I was four. My dad talks about a lot, of course I don’t listen because I barely remember my mom besides that she died. I got to skip most of school today, Melody (an beautiful name for an ugly woman) took me to the mental hospital.
“Melody, why are we going here again, it was only a nightmare.”
“Because I’m your mother,” she replied.
“Screw you,” My most common comeback.
“There you just lost your phone for a week,”
“I never use it so why the hell would I care,” my biggest lie ever.
“No friends over either,” she hates me.
No friends over. Real funny story because I have no friends. Everyone thinks I’m a freak so I never bother to talk to anyone. After my “meeting” let’s call it, I’m put under house arrest for two days. I really couldn’t care less because no one even likes me. Period. When my dad gets home I told him about Melody acting up. He said I was a “special” teen and that I needed to act more mature. Sometimes I want to float away, fall asleep, and never wake up. Well today really sucked, house arrest and a fight. Forget it, I’m going to last two hours in the real world.

The night was young and Kyle, Jose, and some other of the higher ups went to the HellFire Club. It was a new club near The Campus, specifically for teens and young adults.
“Yo Kyle, go find a chick, I got some now” Jose bragged.
“Shut up and I will okay.”
“Aw, shit he getting feisty!”
“Shut the fuck up before I…”
Kyle was cut off by a blonde chick. As a matter of fact, it was the same girl he asked “What happened to the jock?”
“Hey, uh…”
“What’s the matter? Was the dude your boyfriend or something?”
“Yeah, I just, I like you better than I have liked him. It would be unfaithful to do this to him.”
“At least I’m not like him, a jerk who cares primarily about himself. And yes I’ll go out with you.”
Jose was in some dark rooms with his girls, Kyle knew what was happening. He called Jose and he answered, and Kyle knew what was happening in there.
“Hey, do you want to go in a room and sleep, ‘cause I’m tired.” Kyle said.
“Sure, do you…”

“Want to have sex in there, I don’t care.”
Jose and Kyle left HellFire and went to for a joyride. They saw some lower class racers and they ranted them. They got to the Beltline.
“Yo Kyle, I’m pissed of you controlling me.” Jose yelled.
“So you want to lose all of your power now, don’t you?”
“I don’t give a shit, ya know I’ll beat you.”
Some people heard the fighting and came.
“Let’s go, right here and know”
“Whatever”
The race was down the Beltline and to the Vacation Homes. Kyle immediately got ahead of Jose and was good until the barrier. Cops came.
“Dammit the 5-0!” Kyle said
They were more aggressive than the first round of cops. Kyle and Jose tried not to let them screw them up. But Kyle and Jose were hit and collided. Jose flipped over and Kyle just had spun-out. Kyle made a run for it. He quickly engaged the engine and sped back to his house. He walked in to be greeted with pissed parents.
“What the Hell is this?” Kyle’s Dad asked rudely.
It was a Youtube video of the race. Kyle knew he shouldn't have done that.
“Also, someone came over and said that she was pregnant”
“Fuck you, I hate you both! I’m getting out like you want me to.” Kyle yelled.
Kyle stopped by the girls’ house.
“My parents are going to kill us.” she said.
“Wait, what’s your name?”
“Claire, do you have any money?”
“Enough to buy a Campus Apartment.”
“Okay…”




Note: This is a slightly inappropriate part, however this is based off real life and this stuff happens.

Part 2 done very quickly!


He was going around Downtown, driving for his life. He thought downtown areas are supposed to have a lot of alleys, but not in Pleasant View. As his thought closed, he found and alley and just like magic, he maneuvered almost perfectly through it.
“Yes! Home-free!” Kyle yelled as he quickly put an end to the chase.
“Hey, ya done running?” Jose asked waiting, listening to rap.
“Yeah, why are you asking?”
“There’s a new car at the Bounty Car Lot…” Jose was cut off.
“I don’t have much cash.” Kyle said.
“It matters how much Bounty ya have from cops. Any ways, it’s a Supra, go check it out.”
Kyle drove safely to The Bounty Car Lot. As a matter of fact, it was his second time driving safely. Since it’s in the Industrial Zone, he knew it could be mischievous. He slowly parked near it and went in.
“Hey, welcome in.” The clerk said.
This place was much nicer than Kyle thought, a lot nicer.
“I’m Kyle De Thyre, Jose sent me here, from the big Suburb Pose.”
“Jose sent you didn’t he, oh yeah, the Supra!” The clerk said.
The clerk remembered getting a call from Jose to hold the Supra for Kyle.
“How much Bounty does it cost?”
“License Plate code.”
“SZE-8351.”
“Oh my God, that used to be God’s code!”
Turns out Kyle had the best racer in Pleasant View’s old car. He is called God, because he’s the God of street racing in Pleasant View. However, his real name is Sam Rye, a mid-twenty year old guy who was just like Kyle.
“Here take the Supra for free! Knowing that you will be a legend soon means it’s free.”
“Sweet, nice doing business with you.”
Kyle got a call from Jose. He said that they will go to the club in Downtown, if Kyle gets some Bounty at The Campus. Sweet deal isn’t it.
“Oh God, a new noob! He ain’t gonna beat us!” A high school jock said.
As the looks became more visibly clear, the guy who criticized Kyle was the leader, and the youngest. There was a nerd who knew everything about every car, he probably fixed the cars. There was a guy like Kyle, however looked completely different.
“I think the kid wanna race, don’t ya think.” The jock said, though he was asking the nerd.
“Bring it, though I will kick you ass”
The jock started to cuss me out then a cop came.
“Uh I got a gang fight, well it looks like it, on Campus Interchange. I’ll go break it up. Wait, it looks like the SXE plate on the Supra. I’ll go take them out.”
“Good, get the SZE, don’t worry about the other guy.” Srgt. Hampliton said.
Kyle and the jock got into a fist fight. The jock got in his car waiting for Kyle.
“Get in your car we’ll settle this now!”
Kyle was dumbfounded at the moment and hit the cop, breaking his nose.
“Shoot!” Kyle whispered
The race was on. They were dodging cops and an SUV cop! At the highest point, Kyle went off-road breaking into the High School. The cop followed.
“Oh God I’m slowing down, students in here.” The cop said.
Turns out that Kyle was going about 20 mph faster than the cop and dodging students much better. He lost the cop in there and was 30 second from the end of the race. He won with no sign of the jock. Everyone looked sad and worried.
“Hey what happened to the jock?” Kyle asked.
“He looked back and thought you killed yourself. Then got hit by a car on the side. He’s in the hospital, only a broken leg.”
“That’s what he gets for cussing me out.” Kyle said.
Though someone was almost killed, Kyle is a step closer to ruling Pleasant View. Beat one of the Campus’s best. At this rate, he may be able to rule Pleasant View in months time.

This is my first story in a LONG time, so please tell me how I'm doing because I have had this idea in my head for a longer time.

Comment, suggest, there will be more

Everyone has a dream. Every single kid has a dream in life. The girls who care about fashion want to be fashion models. The sporty boys want to become pro athletes. Some want to become racers, going through tracks like Zolder and stuff. One kid, Kyle De Thyre wants to become a Street racer.

11 YEARS AGO…

“Mom, mom! I know what I want to be when I grow up!”
“*smiling* Oh my God, what?”
“A street racer!”
“… Wait are you… uh… serious?”
“Yes I am!”
“Just one question. Why in the name of God do you want to become a street racer? You know nothing good comes out of that, right?”
“Because it looks fun, going down the Beltline at 150 MPH, at the rush of time.”

PRESENT DAY

“Happy 16^th birthday Kyle!” Mom and Dad said.
“My God, it’s like 3 in the morning.” Kyle complained.
“We got you something you’ve been wanting. Come downstairs to the garage.”
“Fine…”
Kyle got dressed in the first pair of clothes he could find. Put Proactiv on, brushed his teeth, and ran to the garage. There was a cover over something, and Kyle(like any 16 year old teen) flipped out and thought it was a cheap, beat up, old muscle car.
“Happy birthday!”
“Holy crap! A nice car! A 2005 Lexus IS300.” Kyle yelled.
He knew what he had to face if he screwed up and wrecked the ride. He hopped in and went to Pleasant View High. It’s in the same campus as Pleasant View College so some street racing will be going on.
NOW THE STORY BEGINS

After school Kyle went to his street pose and showed off his car.
“Aw shit Kyle got his own ride!” Said the leader, Jose.
“Yeah, no more renting out your shit”
Kyle had to say this, their rides were old, crappy, riced up muscles. Besides, his Lexus can out run any of their junk. Also he had to pay a fee, half of his winning cash.
“Hey who think I can beat this ride?” Jose yelled
About half of the pose betted that Jose would win. The other half thought I would win.
“How three hundred bucks sound? I know ya want it.”
“Get ready, I’m not holding back.”
The race is from North Point road which isn’t the top of Pleasant View, but is of the Suburb Area. The ending point is at East Boulevard, in Downtown. Jose got in his old 1969 Camaro and tried to intimidate Kyle.
“Hey ya wanna give up? It’s your last chance.”
“When I’m dead.”
The race started with Kyle in the lead. Turns out the race was in the middle of Rush Hour, so it was a lot more dangerous than at night. Then, when all was going good, street racers biggest fears came. Cops.
“Oh my God, how did I get myself into this? I got to out run them, it’s my only hope.” Kyle said to his self.
Kyle quickly maneuvered in between traffic and cops until the last thousand feet. A roadblock was set ready to catch him and bust him.
“I’m damned.” Kyle said depressed.
If it wasn’t for that mother fucker Jose, he wouldn’t be in this mess. Kyle finds an opening, goes through it and cops start the shoot down(not like Kyle would have a gun).
“What the hell are you doing?” Yelled Srgt. Hampliton
The cops aren’t holding back, Kyle knew this was the end. Or was it? He knows a lot of back alleys in the Suburbs, but not Downtown. If he can find one, that’ll be his window of escape.

I just wrote this... well here ya go!


Need For Speed World Car Class Review

Three days ago, Car Classes were released. They got everyone hyped about it then they came out.
We all know everything the NFSW team makes comes with a drawback. Let’s start with the good stuff.
Cars are more organized to find in your garage which is useful to Heavy-Boost-Buyers.
Races are reduced to six, “meaning” less lag and better sync.
The After Market drop rate was dramatically increased. No more X1 power-ups and a 1 million dollar JP.
Get 4 car slots (For the way up or at level 50)
Now I said it had quite a few drawbacks didn’t I? Yes I did, let’s see them.
The traffic issues are worse than ever, Random spawn areas sometimes on or in front of your car.
Drew told us no Carrera GT this week but he trolled us and put it in Single Player.
Car prices were increased over 100 THOUSAND over their real world price.
The current best car (911 GT2) is reduced to A class yet the 911 GT3 RS is in S class in a hurry.
Some parts decrease the stats, even though they are better in the one/s you already have.
Some Class restricted events are impossible to beat unless you spam Power ups making you the Spam
King and/or a new HBB.
Event of the day restricts you to 12-15 events per day. There are 80(if I recall) events ingame, meaning you are playing a demo that you bought for $500+ (HBB).
When you beat a person with crappy driving skills, they will cuss you out then you say “Dude, it’s a game”. They report you.


This was a pretty bad update for NFSW which is killing it by the moment. If they hadn’t put off Canyons, it would be as lively as ever. Now Facebook crappers, you happy what you suggested? I hope so because it’s your game now. Even Obi said that. Read, rate, Sign to get all the tracks back.

Bring all the tracks back Petition

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